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I want to deteriorate into the ocean and feel the waves
Break over my spine
Because I’ve learnt through trial and error
That holding my breath only makes my heart beat faster

And plain white pills do nothing to soothe
The anxiety sewn deep within my bones
The bitter aftertaste still lingers in the back of my throat
much like the feeling
of her breath in my lungs
and turned them into rubble, she said they were defective.
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grew-up-a-screw-up Sep 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you.
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simplyeddie Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, this is incredible. You are an amazing writer :) 
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grew-up-a-screw-up Aug 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much ^^
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simplyeddie Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem :) 
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absoluteabsence Jun 17, 2013
Beautiful - love it!
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:icongrew-up-a-screw-up:
grew-up-a-screw-up Jun 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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absoluteabsence Jun 18, 2013
thank you for the poem!
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:icongrew-up-a-screw-up:
grew-up-a-screw-up Jun 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Don't mention it!
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Prof-Stein Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You make me wish I was a Psychonaut.

Seriously how do you create this imagery and beauty?
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