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There’s something raw and organic
About the way the human body
Arches and flexes and quivers
In the quiet darkness
Where pants and gasps
Fill the air with a charged pulse
The way the arms curve around the neck
And the flesh pulls against the skin
Taut, bend, flex
There is something honest
About the way
The body does not lie
The toes curl and the hips sway
When the silence is met like a lover
It’s just so fucking real, you know?
The shapes, the curves
Convex, concave then convex
The smearing of the lips
And resistance of the flesh
Whether they be between bed sheets or parked cars
The body lies writhing
The pulse, the sweat and curve of the waist
These are not the musings of the body
But the manifestations of the soul
First poem in a few months so excuse the probability of it being off and potentially disastrous 
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NemoX7 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
First time viewing your work. So far to say I'm impressed. I didn't find much wrong with the poem as it flows off the tongue nicely. Overall I enjoyed this.
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grew-up-a-screw-up Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you very much :glomp:
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svenspade09 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
This is astounding and magnificent, Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it and you have done just that with such elegant's; just wonderful. 
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grew-up-a-screw-up Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks so much as always! :glomp:
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svenspade09 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
Glomp! as always I'm here for you and love your work (offers rum and coke)
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grew-up-a-screw-up Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student General Artist
Haha that's all i need :glomp:
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svenspade09 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
the words or the Rum? :D
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grew-up-a-screw-up Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student General Artist
both :D
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svenspade09 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
hope you like Bacardi 8 year thats all I got and any time with the words
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grew-up-a-screw-up Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student General Artist
they both sound brilliant to me 
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