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I seem to have forgotten the sound of my own heartbeat
Splitting apart my limbs I've found the source of my insanity
Coiled around veins and arteries
Star dust and a lazy man’s drug
Has put me to sleep under fictitious pretenses
Of forbidden apples and two faced prince charming’s
syndrome is a really pleasant word, syn-dro-me it's so lovely in the way it rolls off the tongue
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
I love the way u write, it is effortlessly poetic. Really great :) very talented xx
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grew-up-a-screw-up Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much c:
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
:) pleasure x
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
Holy crap, i absolutely love the bemusing and intense emotive feel wrapped around a theme that i can barely understand but completely love, coupled with a strange and spectacular rhythm.
So ,ummmm, yeah i like it. :D
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grew-up-a-screw-up Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much, I'm happy you took the time to read it, enjoy it and write me a lovely comment so thank you c:
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ssensory Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Student Writer
I favorited this awhile back, and was surprised I never commented, so I will now.

Even though this is six lines, it's perfect being this short. It's so impactful - I love the word choice. It's seriously such a beautiful poem, the imagery is fantastic. Ah. :heart:

I am such a sucker for mental disorder-like poems. Very intriguing.
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grew-up-a-screw-up Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much I'm glad I could woo you with my angst-y poetry, but in all seriousness thank you so much for the lovely comment
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ssensory Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student Writer
You're very welcome! :heart:
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Harzlek Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
Syndrome has two syllables... I am sure you know.
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grew-up-a-screw-up Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student General Artist
I do, I just like playing around with words and testing them on my tongue.
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